[He racks his memory (fairly decent when he's focused), and starts the movements over again with her suggestions implemented. Call it about a thirty percent improvement. And he flubs a few of the kicks and definitely cannot do the high kick at all. Not without pulling his groin muscle. When he's done, he's left breathless, which is ironic for the Air kata.]
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[He racks his memory (fairly decent when he's focused), and starts the movements over again with her suggestions implemented. Call it about a thirty percent improvement. And he flubs a few of the kicks and definitely cannot do the high kick at all. Not without pulling his groin muscle. When he's done, he's left breathless, which is ironic for the Air kata.]
H-How was that?